Torn

Amidst the tears of joy, there is a sadness,
a feeling of loss, of falling behind.
Behind the smiles lurk wild emotions,
twisting and churning inside.
With each new song, memories return,
of stolen moments long past.
Yet at the close of day, love lingers on
as a reminder that pain doesn’t last.

Musings on Poetry that flowed from my brain at 2:46 pm Monday, Sep. 12, 2005

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Comment by The Seeker

September 12, 2005 @ 2:53 pm

Intresting, it strikes a chord yet, it is as if I am a bystander watching.

Comment by Rae

September 12, 2005 @ 11:15 pm

very nice one

Comment by Adrian

September 14, 2005 @ 12:21 am

I’m drawn in by this one. The irony of love and hurt in the same place is well crafted. I like this.

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