Say when

As she stood there,
The rain hid her tears.
She could barely see
As he looked past her.

The roaring thunder
Drowned out her sobs.
She could read his lips
As he chatted away.

The blinding flashes
Showed her his face.
Lit as if from within
A darkness still hidden.

Chilled down to the bone
She held her position.
Maybe one day soon
She would hear him say,

“Come in from the rain”

Right now I am feeling kinda indescribable emoticon indescribable and sleepy emoticon sleepy...
Musings on Poetry that flowed from my brain at 1:45 pm Friday, Dec. 2, 2005

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5 Comments »

Comment by Adrian

December 2, 2005 @ 6:46 pm

Nice.

Comment by The Seeker

December 5, 2005 @ 8:55 am

wow

Comment by bianca

December 5, 2005 @ 1:02 pm

Thanks guys.

Comment by Rae

December 5, 2005 @ 10:52 pm

Yup, nice peice indeed. These kinds of things chill you after a while though. No pun intended ;)

Comment by Le-Anne

December 12, 2005 @ 5:42 pm

I like!!!

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