my song

these feet
delicately glide
deftly guide
my life

these legs
solidy support
sexily entwine
my spirit

this hand
lightly caresses
tightly holds 
my love

this skin
softly embraces
smoothly shields
my world

this heart
deeply adores
sweetly controls
my soul

Done for Poetry Thursday

Musings on Poetry that flowed from my brain at 12:05 am Thursday, Oct. 5, 2006

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7 Comments »

Comment by madd

October 5, 2006 @ 12:26 am

A lovely description of what I have to believe is a lovely soul..thanks,M

Comment by bianca

October 5, 2006 @ 8:29 am

Thanks for that, M

Comment by Cynthia

October 5, 2006 @ 10:02 am

Oh, very nice. I like concise little things that have a lot to say. Beautiful imagery, too.

Comment by bassChocolate

October 5, 2006 @ 2:15 pm

Nicely done.

Comment by Melissa

October 6, 2006 @ 11:52 am

lLovely piece :D

Comment by twitches

October 6, 2006 @ 6:22 pm

You have quite a gift with internal/slant rhyme and repetition. Nice rhythm to the lines.

Comment by bianca

October 6, 2006 @ 9:36 pm

Thanks guys. Sometimes simple works well. :D

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